Hi Everyone,
I love reading your stories!!!
I know that you can write incredible stories. You know what I mean, stories that have characters, a setting a problem and a resolution.
You guys have written me some awesome stories so now is your chance to have them published on the internet.
Just write a story in the comments section and I will give you 5 raffle tickets for the present box. How cool is that!!!
I am looking forward to reading your stories.
Catch you later.
Mr M
The friendship. My little Pony.
Ones a upon a time there lived some Ponies, one was called Star tvingcla, she likes Books another one was called Apple Jack she likes apples.There was a chaos, he made every thing bad the Ponies lost their magic teyarus it made every thing Happy. The end.
Hi Rehasha,
What a great story! I love a story that has a problem and then the problem gets fixed.
Do you have any other great ideas for stories?
Well done. Raffle tickets are coming your way.
Mr M
one day there was a tennis clinic. It was in the school tennis court. I met my friend Teya, Madison,Daniel, Callum, Bailey, Dylan. Then I met my tennis coach and we played tennis games. After that our coach said we didn’t have enough tennis rackets we felt sad. Kelly coach said “don’t be sad,we will share
the rackets”. Finally we were happy.
Hi Sayuri,
What a great story! I loved the message in your story – Sharing fixes everything. That is so true.
Well done Sayuri and keep writing.
Mr M
The magic puppie
once upon a time there was a magic puppie her name was Sparkeles. one day sparkeles went to the park. she was playing with her friends. she saw someone was falling off the swing. she broke her leg. sparkeles went to her and fixed her leg by her powers. she came sparkeles best friend. they live happily ever after. The End
Dear Dithara,
I loved your story! I like the way that your story had a problem and then it was fixed by a magic puppy. I wish I had a magic puppy.
Keep writing great stories.
Well done,
Mr M
There were two pigllet’s and there names were Boo and Squeak.
They were playing tiggy and Squeek fell over and Squeak’s arm was brocken.
Then Dave cam and he fixed it up and he made Squeak’s arm feel better and she had fun.
Hi Gemma,
You wrote a fantastic story. I like the way you had a problem in your story and then you fixed the problem.
Well done.
Mr M
The silly puppy.
One day the silly puppy went for a walk and she so a mean dog, they fought for the bone. The silly puppy got it first. Then the mean dog got it. But the silly puppy had a good idea. we should share the bone. Then the mean dog became the silly puppys friend. The end.
Dear Rehasha,
You wrote a wonderful story about friendship. I liked the way that the two dogs decided that it was better to share the bone.
Well done.
Mr M
There was a girl named Haley
She cared about other people. Mean Mac came and stole her toy. Then nice Zac said stop and he stopped and he said sorry and they became friends.
the end.
One day three little friends went for a picnic. They had a basket full of food. The three friends went to play in the park. When they were playing a stranger came and took the picnic basket.
At least the friends knew the stranger who took the basket. Then the stranger ran away and the three friends ran after him and took the basket back. So then the stranger said “sorry”. The three friends were really happy!
Hi Vindi,
I love your story. What a mean stranger!
I think the three friends were really nice to forgive him. I guess they were happy just to get the basket back.
Fantastic writing Vindi. You are a great speller.
Mr M
Once there was two cats they had a fight. then super Taj fixed the fight they were friends again.
Hi Amy,
What a fantastic first story on our blog. I like the way your story had a problem and then the problem was fixed.
Keep up the great writing.
MrM
Once there was two dragons they had a fight then the dog fixed the fight .
Great story Amy.
How did the dog fix the fight?
On the weekend my family and I went to the Berwick show and I rode on the merry go around then I won a toy dog on the clowns. I had my face painted too. After that I went to my pops and nans for a sleep over.
Hairy and Merry
Once upon a time there were two horses. one called Merry one called Hairy. They were sisters. One day when they were playing together, they fought because Merry was playing with a toy. Hairy wanted the same toy. Then mum came and said to Hairy after Merry is finished you can have turn. After they shared they became best sisters. The End.
Green lantern is a super hero. He got shot into another world. Someone shot him back into his world. He lived happily ever after. The end.
Lost Kitten
oneday there was a girl and kitten they were playing at the park. Then kitten
ran away. kitten was lost then girl was running and walking to find kitten. After girl was crying then she went home and she made posters with her mum. Her mum put the posters on trees. Then a boy was looking at the posters then he found the kitten. He knocked on every door then he tried the last door he knocked the girl saw her kitten and she called her mum she saw the kitten. Then they all had a party to celebrate then every one was happy. The end
On the weekend
I Went to two prti’ s. there were
some new and
old fren’ s . I like them all veri
much. I did not go down the bmx trac
I was too sced . so I siad to Holli can you play with me . and she siad
yes. the end.
On the weekend it was my brother’s birthday and my best friend came. Then we ate cake, after that me and my friend played. Then they went home. I had a great time.
test
Once a upon a time there was a cricket match it was a kids cricket match i saw my
friends Anna ,Toby, Gamma and Sam it was good .Next the jugde was picking the colours Anna was red Toby was green Gamma was pink and Sam was blue. When the game started Anna was bowling and Sam was batting. When Sam was batting Sam broke his arm the nurse came and said Sam needs a rest and the nurse fixed it and he lived happily ever after. The end.
Once a upon a time there was some monsters .One was a butterfly monster. The other one was a bug monster. One day the bug monster bit the butterfly monsters wing. The bug was jelous for him self . Then the bug said sorry. But the butterfly monster did not forgive the bug monster. The bug monster desided to do a joke. That made the butterfly monster laugh. And they lived happily ever after. The end .
The Friendship
One day there was a butterfly called Lila.
Lila had a friend called Ned he was an elephant. They were in the beach. The beach had lots of molti colourd sea shells.
When they were playing with the ball, solo the tiger came , he asked if he could play with the ball. When it was his turn he smacked Ned on the back ran away with the ball and hid the ball under the sand. Then Lila said kindely , tiger please don’t heart my friend. Rainbow fish saw everything when she was having a bath. Rainbow fish said listen to each other and care about each other. They all agreed. Then tiger asked Rainbow fish, where he beried their ball. Rainbow fish said over there, then Solo gave the ball to Ned then everybody was happy. They all lived happily ever after.
The end
The princesss and the king.
Once upon a time there was a princess and a king. They loved to sleep all day and they loved to look out the window. One day they went to the beach and made a sand castle. One day the king went walking down the street and saw a big bull coming to him but the princess came and saved the king. They lived happily ever after.
The End.
Barbie and the Lost Bracelet
Once upon a time there was a girl who was called Barbie.
One day Barbie was walking down the path and she lost her bracelet. Then a boy picked it up and took it with him. Barbie felt sad. So she knocked on every door in Barbie Street. Then they found the person and the person gave it back. The end.
One day there was a little girl walking to a little cottage as she was walking a kidnapper was hiding in the bushes and he jumped out with his cage. The girl saw the kidnapper and she ran for her life to the little cottage. The kidnapper sneaked around the little cottage, when the girl left to go home the kidnapper would jump out and grab her and put her in his big cage. Then he would take her home and cook her up for supper. If the little girl didn’t return home her mum would be furious and she didn’t return home. The mum went looking for her and the kidnapper was hiding again. He jumped out and got the mum also with his big cage. He then will cook the little girl and her mum for supper. His friends joined the kidnapper for supper. The leftovers lasted the kidnapper 3 weeks.
I got this idea from Chitty Chitty Bang Bang.
Hi Kole
Nice story but a bit too scary for me. Can you write me a story with a happy ending or change this one so that the girl and her mum got away.
Well done.
See you at school.
Once there lived a princess and she lived in a castle and she was trapped for ever. She was sad and then there came a prince that came too rescue her. the end
Hi Aurora,
What a fantastic story!
I would like to know why the princess was trapped in the castle and how the princes rescued her.
Could you please tell me more.
Thanks
Mr M
the fairy garden
once upon a time there lived a fairy and she lived in a forest and her name was sunshine one day she made a fairy garden and she played in it. It made other fairies come to her and that made her happy.
the end.
Olden Days
One day there was a boy named Mathew and his twin sister Chloe they were in the same class. Every day they rode their horses named Nithish and Miqaulten and Sophie and Hannah. Two were Mathews and two were Chloes. Chloes horses were Sophie and Hannah. Mathews horses were Nithish and Miqaulten. And every day they would do some exericses and see which horse was the best. And today for Mathew his horse Miqaulten was the best .And today for Chloe it was hard for her because they were both good at exerising.It was getting hard then Mathew had an idea! It was to see which horse was listening to Chloe. And it worked and of they went to their school. The teacher was super angry! Because they were late every day to school. Then they both got hit by the cane. After school their mum asked if they had a good day ! But the children said nothing in return. They were very sad. After a while they said about the school story to their parents. And after they talked they felt better and then they went to ride on their horses.